Character sketch

My brother Henry

My brother Henry is taller than me and he is 10 years old.  He is a year 6 now and he's about to go to Intermediate.  Sometimes my brother and I play with his cards after school.  He can make me laugh by telling me funny jokes.  He's eyes are dark brown and he really likes Burger King.  At school sometimes we play basket ball and talk about games with my friend Aaron.  He is afraid of heights.  He wants to be navy solder.                                                                    



I am learning to put more details in my writing.
I give myself a 6 out of 10.  I am going to put in more details next time.