My Mother's Day Poem

My reflection:

I chose this poem for my Showcase because it really made my mum's heart race and she looked like she was going to cry.  So I know she like my poem.

Learning to Describe a Memorable Meal

My reflection on my writing:
I am proud of my work because it has a simile, a great verb (rushed),and some interesting adjectives. Look at my first draft to see what I highlighed. Next I would like to do more editing. I liked putting in paragraphs to divide my my writing. I liked using speech marks too!